Is Mr Wolf Guilty Of 1st Degree Murder?

This week we have been learning to plan and structure persuasive writing because it is coming close to speeches. We have a plan of why Mr Wolf is guilty! We have two statements about why Mr Wolf is guilty and why he is not. For the structure of the speech we had to choose from why he was guilty and why he was not. I chose that he is guilty. It has more interesting than non guilty. On my plan and writing I have highlighted orange the points that is on my success criteria. 

I enjoyed writing and planning this piece of writing because it will get me ready for my actual speech.

I found it tricky to add to my speech because I had no idea what to add to my writing.

Here is my plan and writing.