Today we wrote a story we has three Scenario's to choose from or we could make one up i chose a Scenario
I enjoyed writing my story it was fun to write and when i read through i really like it.
I found hard to think of some lines.
i wold change the Scenario to one i can make up
Someone has stolen the teachers lunch!
Suspects: Kylah (the one who loves to read)
Mya (the one who likes to play outside)
Eva (Helps in the P.E shed)
Clues: Muddy footprints, Crumbs, Teachers keys in door.
One day it was raining, everyone was in class doing the work and the lunch bell rings “Ring” Ring”. Everyone goes out and the teacher goes to lunch while all the others play and she looks in her bag wondering where it is. She looked and looked but couldn't find it. The class room was locked at lunch but before that it wasn't. There were muddy footprints on the floor and her keys were in the classroom door! And there we crumbs from what she had in her lunch was a cookie and a sandwich and some fruit. She questioned all the students in the class. It only came down to three students. The first student was shocked and she said “I didn't do it. I was playing on the field”.
The second one says, “I didn't do it. I was in the library reading and drawing”.
The third one says, “I am not the victim here it had to be them i was helping in the P.E shed”.The teacher was surprised at what they said so she thinks about what they said she remembered the first one saying she was on the field and it was raining and there was puddles and mud so she said, She must be a victim she in not innocent so i must keep questioning her
And the third one said she was in the P.E shed. she must have been eating and my food was gone after she must have sneaked out of the shed and unlocked the classroom and steal my food.
The second one is innocent because you are not allowed to eat in the library!
She got the two girls and questioned them.
The first one said “Why am i here!”
The teacher said “Because I think you stole my food out of my bag!”
Then she said “How would i steal your food i cant unlock the door”
Then the teacher said “True but still you can still get in with help”
Then she questioned the other student and said “You must have stolen my food, you had the keys to the classroom as well and must have gotten my food and left crumbs!”
Then the student said “ No i did not ask the others who were with me”
Then the teacher said “I will then”
She questions the others in the P.E shed. They said she was not in there and she said that she was going to get a drink of water.
The teacher goes back to her and said “ You lied that's bad but I well I still question you because I am not sure if you actually did it or not”
She keeps questioning them and she got an answer The girl that was in the P.E shed said “ Fine i did it i just don't want my friends to get in trouble for what i did”
The teacher said “ You lied and that's bad but at least you told the truth now”
She said “Do i have to do something”
The teacher said “Yea, you do go say sorry for what you did and come clean up this mess”
The girl said “Ok I will”.
The end
Hyvää päivää Mya,
ReplyDeleteYou were a great detective in your story looking for connections between the clues and the suspects statements.
Keep up the great work.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden